I liked it so much .it has a great premise, the protagonist sets the bar high for a great development considering it has no clue about her past nor is she completely aware of what’s coming or what is she heading to
I really like all the characters. Every character stands alone when it comes to having personality, and in future developments
The father - which has to be the most intriguing of all- seems to be going through an identity crisis leading to his present presence while still having to discover and discuss about his origins and past ‘not a satan nor an angel obviously’
Many characters were introduced at last making it more interesting and puts many questions in mind
coming to a conclusion, I really am surprised with the creator’s writing and art design og and full of like and I’m really am excited to see what’s coming
Game has environmentalism as a main theme in the synopsis only for me to read that it was coded with AI. Not a great way to promote those themes to people who care about it. A let-down by an otherwise great premise and beautiful looking game.
"The RenPy tool acts as an AI-native bridge, transforming AI agents like Claude or GPT into potent Ren'Py development assistants. It addresses the lack of a built-in editor in Ren'Py by allowing developers to describe desired changes in natural language, which the AI then translates into valid Ren'Py script, inserts into the correct location, and automatically compiles for verification. This streamlines the development workflow, enabling rapid prototyping and iteration through AI-driven script generation and project management."
However "minor", is this not still using Generative AI? I do not stand for its use in any shape or form. I don't really understand what you mean when you say you only used it to "learn". Generative AI is bad for the environment and works off a theft-based model even if you're not using it for art.
The developer used it just as a tool to help with the coding only ! It’s her first project on here it’s okay to use some help in something complex like coding for the first time . Can’t you just say something positive? You didn’t even try the actual game with all the effort scripts , art style , etc
why would I spend my time playing a game that uses a "tool" that is antithetical to its own core messaging? I feel like that's missing the whole point. Not to mention I did actually say something positive if you read my comment, about how both the premise and art itself look and seem great. But great premise and art won't make me play a game made with AI. And to be honest, its not really clear just how much AI is used to code it, with only the vague description of "just" using it to "learn" basic coding.
that’s your choice . But using ai to LEARN something is a good thing and one of its main purposes . I’m also against using AI in bad ways like stealing art styles from actual artists.
When I said I used AI to learn the basics, I meant simple things like how to move a character in a certain way, how to display dialogue, and other basic Ren'Py syntax "I also faced some issues at the beginning that I couldn't find solutions for online, so I had to ask AI for help". That was only at the beginning. After that, I continued developing the rest of the project and fixing errors on my own without anyone/anything else's involvement.
If you don't want to play projects that involved any use of AI whatsoever, even something as minor as that, that's completely your choice, and I respect it.
What I don't appreciate is being portrayed as hypocritical or as someone who "doesn't really care about the environment" because of that. Those are assumptions about me that go beyond what I actually did.
I want to end this discussion here, and I won't be responding to any further replies that reopen the discussion or expand it further.
WAAAH KINDEER CONGRATULATIONS!! THIS IS SCRUMPTIOUS!! A REAL FEAST!!! .·°՞(ᗒ□ᗕ)՞°·. ❤❤
Dirty Justice is EXACTLY the story I've been looking for (and the fact you made it is even better)!! I love this dystopian setting and the goal to avenge/revenge! I'm also happy to not have been disappointed by the psychological horror scenes (˶ˆᗜˆ˵)
The beginning of the story is nice, but the contrast from the 'philosophical questions' to a sort of flashback isn't really smooth. It's like drinking hot soup and eating cold ice cream right after. They're both delicious, it's just the immediate change in temperature that made it feel out of place. ☆ You can maybe remove the 'flashback' entirely (since it was mentionned on the way back home) OR ☆ Start with the 'flashback' --> Julie interrupts --> and before standing up to go the the grocery store: the 'paragraph about hating the government.'
I must say that your art is so charming and all the characters are lovely (even the guard)!! (´▽`ʃƪ)♡♡ Ayala and Father are my favourites! Didn't expect him to be so buttercup (♡ˊ͈ ꒳ ˋ͈)
Oh! Another (minor) feedback is – right after witnessing the explosion – to try avoiding the word 'body.' It was mentionned quite a few times during the lash out/cry moment, and the explosion made it feel too overused (￣▽￣||) ☆ You could simply say: "You were too exhausted to run" or "Everything aches at once" OR ☆ Not say it at all like:"The pain drives itself deeper [...], like blades being forced into your skin over and over again." Otherwise, you did a good job describing the pain a tertiary blast injury brings ദ്ദി ( ᵔ ᗜ ᵔ )
I hope you add more CGs and that Julie isn't completely forgotten. It's a bit of a shame we didn't get more insight on her personality before she died and MC forgot about her.
I can't wait to know who the little panda guy is and how MC's role will play in the story! ( ˶˘ ³˘)♡ This is gonna blow up for sure! ☆(≧▽≦)☆
just like MC's house (</3)
OMMGG, THANK YOUU SOO MUCHH!! I'm really, really happy that the game managed to draw you in enough! ◝(ᵔᗜᵔ)◜.•♡
I never expected it to actually end up being "exactly your favorite type," since what I knew was that you're usually drawn to romance the most 𐔌՞ ܸ. .ܸ՞𐦯..
+ Thank you so much for your feedback about improving the dialogue at the beginning. Honestly, I completely agree. When I wrote the first dialogues and the scenes that came after them, there was a really long gap between writing them, and I just didn't feel like going back and editing them.
I also overdid the explosion scene because I was trying to show the viewer everything a person could possibly feel in that situation, and I didn't realize at all that all of those feelings would actually happen within just a few seconds, which is much shorter than the time the reader spent reading it! (I'm definitely fixing all of this.)
I'm also really happy that Ayala and Father managed to catch your interest. That's exactly what I was trying to do, especially since they're both very important to me—especially Father (+dw, Julie won't be forgotten that easily.)
Other than that, I'm very grateful that you liked it. Thank you once again for your support! I REALLY hope it blows up as you said. Itch's algorithm really scares me TvT..
AWW, you noticed!! I would have supported you anyway, but I honestly didn’t expect the story to tackle issues that are really important to me! A wonderful surprise, I couldn't be happier (っ˶ ˘ ᵕ˘) ♡
Phew, glad to know my feedback was useful! I tend to feel like I'm pointing at imaginary issues or looking too much into things (つω⊂* )
It's nice to see you put a lot of care into your characters! I think I'm already attached to them both (ᵕ ´ ∇ ˋ ˶)❤ AND I KNEW FATHER WAS THE FAVOURITE BAHAHA! I completely understand you, Kinder; I melted the moment I saw that smile, and the first ending I got was literally the second. It's all one could ask for (๑˃́ꇴ˂̀๑) + Yaaay! Awesome that Julie won't be forgotten! I'm also curious about the connection with "Mr. Bird" (๑>ᴗ<๑)
And don't fret! DIRTY JUSTICE has all the potential to blow up, it might just need advertisement outside of itch and time! I'm thinking of maybe making fanart and sharing it to gather attention --- if I get your permission of course (っ'ヮ'c)
Don't ever think like that! Your attention to details is actually something really special, and I'm very grateful that you gave me these notes. When I went back and checked the game, I almost died from the cringe, and I immediately fixed them "Not perfectly, but still.."
I can't imagine that there could've been dozens of people in the future who would see these mistakes while I wasn't even aware of them (There are already over 130 people who have played the game before your feedback, and I'm trying to get over it. ≖_≖ )
I would be soo happy if you drew my characters!!!!! I really love it when people care about my works enough to express them through designs or drawings. Of course I give you permission to draw them and post them, thank you so much for your care! (˶ᵔ ᵕ ᵔ˶)
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I liked it so much .it has a great premise, the protagonist sets the bar high for a great development considering it has no clue about her past nor is she completely aware of what’s coming or what is she heading to
I really like all the characters. Every character stands alone when it comes to having personality, and in future developments
The father - which has to be the most intriguing of all- seems to be going through an identity crisis leading to his present presence while still having to discover and discuss about his origins and past ‘not a satan nor an angel obviously’
Many characters were introduced at last making it more interesting and puts many questions in mind
coming to a conclusion, I really am surprised with the creator’s writing and art design og and full of like and I’m really am excited to see what’s coming
Game has environmentalism as a main theme in the synopsis only for me to read that it was coded with AI. Not a great way to promote those themes to people who care about it. A let-down by an otherwise great premise and beautiful looking game.
Hi. The game was NOT coded with AI. Ai was only used to LEARN the basics of coding "the ai tool in RENPY" and fixing minor grammar mistakes.
Please read all what i've said in the page before jumping into conclutions.
"The RenPy tool acts as an AI-native bridge, transforming AI agents like Claude or GPT into potent Ren'Py development assistants. It addresses the lack of a built-in editor in Ren'Py by allowing developers to describe desired changes in natural language, which the AI then translates into valid Ren'Py script, inserts into the correct location, and automatically compiles for verification. This streamlines the development workflow, enabling rapid prototyping and iteration through AI-driven script generation and project management."
However "minor", is this not still using Generative AI? I do not stand for its use in any shape or form. I don't really understand what you mean when you say you only used it to "learn". Generative AI is bad for the environment and works off a theft-based model even if you're not using it for art.
The developer used it just as a tool to help with the coding only ! It’s her first project on here it’s okay to use some help in something complex like coding for the first time . Can’t you just say something positive? You didn’t even try the actual game with all the effort scripts , art style , etc
why would I spend my time playing a game that uses a "tool" that is antithetical to its own core messaging? I feel like that's missing the whole point. Not to mention I did actually say something positive if you read my comment, about how both the premise and art itself look and seem great. But great premise and art won't make me play a game made with AI. And to be honest, its not really clear just how much AI is used to code it, with only the vague description of "just" using it to "learn" basic coding.
that’s your choice . But using ai to LEARN something is a good thing and one of its main purposes . I’m also against using AI in bad ways like stealing art styles from actual artists.
When I said I used AI to learn the basics, I meant simple things like how to move a character in a certain way, how to display dialogue, and other basic Ren'Py syntax "I also faced some issues at the beginning that I couldn't find solutions for online, so I had to ask AI for help". That was only at the beginning. After that, I continued developing the rest of the project and fixing errors on my own without anyone/anything else's involvement.
If you don't want to play projects that involved any use of AI whatsoever, even something as minor as that, that's completely your choice, and I respect it.
What I don't appreciate is being portrayed as hypocritical or as someone who "doesn't really care about the environment" because of that. Those are assumptions about me that go beyond what I actually did.
I want to end this discussion here, and I won't be responding to any further replies that reopen the discussion or expand it further.
Thank you.
WAAAH KINDEER CONGRATULATIONS!! THIS IS SCRUMPTIOUS!! A REAL FEAST!!! .·°՞(ᗒ□ᗕ)՞°·. ❤❤
Dirty Justice is EXACTLY the story I've been looking for (and the fact you made it is even better)!! I love this dystopian setting and the goal to avenge/revenge! I'm also happy to not have been disappointed by the psychological horror scenes (˶ˆᗜˆ˵)
The beginning of the story is nice, but the contrast from the 'philosophical questions' to a sort of flashback isn't really smooth. It's like drinking hot soup and eating cold ice cream right after. They're both delicious, it's just the immediate change in temperature that made it feel out of place.
☆ You can maybe remove the 'flashback' entirely (since it was mentionned on the way back home)
OR
☆ Start with the 'flashback' --> Julie interrupts --> and before standing up to go the the grocery store: the 'paragraph about hating the government.'
I must say that your art is so charming and all the characters are lovely (even the guard)!! (´▽`ʃƪ)♡♡
Ayala and Father are my favourites! Didn't expect him to be so buttercup (♡ˊ͈ ꒳ ˋ͈)
Oh! Another (minor) feedback is – right after witnessing the explosion – to try avoiding the word 'body.' It was mentionned quite a few times during the lash out/cry moment, and the explosion made it feel too overused (￣▽￣||)
☆ You could simply say: "You were too exhausted to run" or "Everything aches at once"
OR
☆ Not say it at all like:"The pain drives itself deeper [...], like blades being forced into your skin over and over again."
Otherwise, you did a good job describing the pain a tertiary blast injury brings ദ്ദി ( ᵔ ᗜ ᵔ )
I hope you add more CGs and that Julie isn't completely forgotten. It's a bit of a shame we didn't get more insight on her personality before she died and MC forgot about her.
I can't wait to know who the little panda guy is and how MC's role will play in the story! ( ˶˘ ³˘)♡
This is gonna blow up for sure! ☆(≧▽≦)☆
just like MC's house (</3)OMMGG, THANK YOUU SOO MUCHH!! I'm really, really happy that the game managed to draw you in enough! ◝(ᵔᗜᵔ)◜.•♡
I never expected it to actually end up being "exactly your favorite type," since what I knew was that you're usually drawn to romance the most 𐔌՞ ܸ. .ܸ՞𐦯..
+ Thank you so much for your feedback about improving the dialogue at the beginning. Honestly, I completely agree. When I wrote the first dialogues and the scenes that came after them, there was a really long gap between writing them, and I just didn't feel like going back and editing them.
I also overdid the explosion scene because I was trying to show the viewer everything a person could possibly feel in that situation, and I didn't realize at all that all of those feelings would actually happen within just a few seconds, which is much shorter than the time the reader spent reading it! (I'm definitely fixing all of this.)
I'm also really happy that Ayala and Father managed to catch your interest. That's exactly what I was trying to do, especially since they're both very important to me—especially Father (+dw, Julie won't be forgotten that easily.)
Other than that, I'm very grateful that you liked it. Thank you once again for your support! I REALLY hope it blows up as you said. Itch's algorithm really scares me TvT..
AWW, you noticed!! I would have supported you anyway, but I honestly didn’t expect the story to tackle issues that are really important to me! A wonderful surprise, I couldn't be happier (っ˶ ˘ ᵕ˘) ♡
Phew, glad to know my feedback was useful! I tend to feel like I'm pointing at imaginary issues or looking too much into things (つω⊂* )
It's nice to see you put a lot of care into your characters! I think I'm already attached to them both (ᵕ ´ ∇ ˋ ˶)❤
AND I KNEW FATHER WAS THE FAVOURITE BAHAHA! I completely understand you, Kinder; I melted the moment I saw that smile, and the first ending I got was literally the second. It's all one could ask for (๑˃́ꇴ˂̀๑)
+ Yaaay! Awesome that Julie won't be forgotten! I'm also curious about the connection with "Mr. Bird" (๑>ᴗ<๑)
And don't fret! DIRTY JUSTICE has all the potential to blow up, it might just need advertisement outside of itch and time! I'm thinking of maybe making fanart and sharing it to gather attention --- if I get your permission of course (っ'ヮ'c)
Don't ever think like that! Your attention to details is actually something really special, and I'm very grateful that you gave me these notes. When I went back and checked the game, I almost died from the cringe, and I immediately fixed them "Not perfectly, but still.."
I can't imagine that there could've been dozens of people in the future who would see these mistakes while I wasn't even aware of them (There are already over 130 people who have played the game before your feedback, and I'm trying to get over it. ≖_≖ )
I would be soo happy if you drew my characters!!!!! I really love it when people care about my works enough to express them through designs or drawings. Of course I give you permission to draw them and post them, thank you so much for your care! (˶ᵔ ᵕ ᵔ˶)
Omgg finally it’s amazinggg!! CONGRATULATIONS KINDER 🎉🎉❤️❤️ I’M SO PROUD OF U
The story is really unique and interesting & your art style is LOVELY 🤍🤍
OMG THANK YOU SO MUCHH, GLAD YOU LIKED IT (˶˃ ᵕ ˂˶)!!!!